Tutor Feedback on Assignment 2

I had a really useful discussion with my tutor on the Assignment. The general points were that I had done a lot of work so far and that I was making progress. There were a number of individual points that needed attention but the main areas were that my

  • Research Question and theory needed to be much firmer
  • The essay will need a clear introduction that says what is going to be examined and why
  • There need to be a justification for the choice of artists to be studied

I felt that I had made progress, but there is still obviously a long way to go.  I will need to take these points into account as I develop the essay.