I had a really useful discussion with my tutor on the Assignment. The general points were that I had done a lot of work so far and that I was making progress. There were a number of individual points that needed attention but the main areas were that my
- Research Question and theory needed to be much firmer
- The essay will need a clear introduction that says what is going to be examined and why
- There need to be a justification for the choice of artists to be studied
I felt that I had made progress, but there is still obviously a long way to go. I will need to take these points into account as I develop the essay.