I was pleased with the feedback from my tutor on Assignment 3, obviously there is still work to do and plenty of room for improvement but an opening line of “A signiﬁcant amount of work and a well-formed and focused strategy for moving forward” is very encouraging.
There are a number of areas where I need to revisit the Assignment and amend it, particularly on the format. I need to break it up into smaller pieces and be careful about the layout so as to make it easier to read and navigate.
There are many very helpful comments on how to improve the work and contextualise it in photographic traditions. I should also consider how best to display the ‘ephemeral’ nature of the pesticide work and allow the flower to disappear, I will consider this as the work develops.